This could become a really great piece if you fix up the grammar a little bit because you've got great ideas there. The poem started out really good but the last two stanzas dragged it out and made it lose it's flow.

divended - is not a word (please check the spelling)

Boy you a liar
^^^
Would probably sound better as [boy, you liar] or [boy, you're a liar]

Thank is was just kind of in a hurry typing this out

I have to say, I really do see great potential in this piece! Honestly, I think you should edit it. Take your time and rearrange it. The first stanza got me interested, but half way through the poem, I started to lose interest. I would like to read it again if you work on it! Let me know!