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  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    You. Are. A. Genius. :] When I saw you wrote something new I was super excited and for good reason too because this is a wonderful piece. I love the way it's written, very interesting :] Glad to see you're writing again. You're awesome. Nik

  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Thought provoking. I really like the word choice though I would have removed some of the unnecessary fillers. Still doesn't take away from the profoundness of the piece. Nice job!

  • 8 years ago

    by The Prince

    By writing for yourself, you're writing for everyone. Beautiful ;)

  • 8 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Very interesting writing. I like this poem. Lots of hidden meanings strewn throughout it seems.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Loved it! your poem held a wonderful explanation to the meaning of love and showed it's mystery... your desire for love is clear, and it's the first poem I've read which describes love as an emotion, not from a lustful view... well done, keep it up!

  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Congrats sweetie :] a well deserved win indeed [: -Nik

  • 8 years ago

    by Mohamed Shinaaz

    Awesome.. i love it...