by Lady Nik
| You. Are. A. Genius. :] When I saw you wrote something new I was super excited and for good reason too because this is a wonderful piece. I love the way it's written, very interesting :] Glad to see you're writing again. You're awesome. Nik | 
by Rachel RTVW
| Thought provoking. I really like the word choice though I would have removed some of the unnecessary fillers. Still doesn't take away from the profoundness of the piece. Nice job! | 
 
    by The Prince
| By writing for yourself, you're writing for everyone. Beautiful ;) | 
by silvershoes
| Very interesting writing. I like this poem. Lots of hidden meanings strewn throughout it seems. | 
by Cindy
| Congrats on your win :) | 
by Dark Secrets
| Loved it! your poem held a wonderful explanation to the meaning of love and showed it's mystery... your desire for love is clear, and it's the first poem I've read which describes love as an emotion, not from a lustful view... well done, keep it up! | 
by Lady Nik
| Congrats sweetie :] a well deserved win indeed [: -Nik | 
| Awesome.. i love it... |