Comments : Mr Plagiarist

  • 13 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    Lines I love:
    Taking all the credit
    On his poetic throne

    Raping minds of ideas each and
    Everyday

    ^^^
    Again strong ideas - lines that make the poem visual

    What I got stuck on was:
    Who puts his name down on,
    Work that is not his

    ^^^
    I would think that it would flow better if it was:
    Who puts his name down,
    on work that is not his

    ???

    Your poem subject again is straight to the point, makes it easy to understand. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Aure

    I love it, absolutely love it

    This phrase I think best but I would change one thing:
    Accept stolen lines
    In actions so weak
    Bending your rhymes
    And the words that you speak

    I would lose the And :
    Bending your rhymes,
    The words that you speak

  • 13 years ago

    by AngelDust

    A very well written piece. The words really ring true and I like the lay out. I think we've all experienced this at some point and it will really speak to people as a whole who are part of poems and quotes. I'm glad you came back doll. You're poetry is too good to miss out on :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Ah yes Mr. Lazy, so far I have not meet him. Well done good flow and image.
    Thanks also for your comments.

  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hmmm, now here is a subject that many of us can relate to, it was well written and well expressed, nicely written. Grant

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this poem but I got angry reading it...
    Someone stealing someone elses poetry is stealing their thoughts and their feelings. I write poetry because of certain things that have happened to me and things that I am feeling. If someone stole these from me, I'd be furious. It would be as if they are taking away from you what happened. Diminishing the reason for the poetry.

    Grrr

    Good work

    x