Comments : Protect

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I agree with minikus this is a very lovely poem. I love the fact that it is listed in love poetry, ( a venue that I rarely browse ) instead of nature. This poem could easily be relative to our relationships in life, though not sure if that metaphor was implied by the author. The one and only hang up I had with this write was the word "loosed". Perhaps it is my southern grammar, but, when reading aloud I wanted to say loosened. However, this is as beautiful of a love poem that I have read on this site regardless of the terminology issue I had with one single word.
    Absolutely amazing write and very worthy of a nomination.