To be honest, this was too much packed into only a few lines. The vocabulary was just too advanced for the normal reader, thus making such a tiny poem a mouthful to read. I think with this poem, simplicity would have been the way to go, I personally would have to look up quite a few of these words to understand the meaning of the poem. Maybe it's just me. :|

Ah maybe not all of them, but one for sure. Oh well, maybe I'm being too critical.