Words full of silent struggles,
formed heavy with whitened knuckles
^^ Theres nothing like coming out with a strong opening stanza...I absolutely loved this! This totally describes what writers go through, I couldn't have worded that better!

What if only one had desired to write,
our stories simply sung at night.
What if none had wished to read,
a bland melody forever copied
^^ Good questions! I think the answer is, the entertainment and poetic world would be sooooo boring!

I have nothing to say about the ending stanza besides I really quite enjoyed it. I wouldn't critique that at all!
Great write!

Only thing i would say is this was really something awesome. i just kind of wished it was a little longer

''What if only one had desired to write,
our stories simply sung at night."
^fave part^

very good read!