Comments : Words Full of Silent Struggles

  • 9 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Words full of silent struggles,
    formed heavy with whitened knuckles
    ^^ Theres nothing like coming out with a strong opening stanza...I absolutely loved this! This totally describes what writers go through, I couldn't have worded that better!

    What if only one had desired to write,
    our stories simply sung at night.
    What if none had wished to read,
    a bland melody forever copied
    ^^ Good questions! I think the answer is, the entertainment and poetic world would be sooooo boring!

    I have nothing to say about the ending stanza besides I really quite enjoyed it. I wouldn't critique that at all!
    Great write!

  • 9 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    Only thing i would say is this was really something awesome. i just kind of wished it was a little longer

    ''What if only one had desired to write,
    our stories simply sung at night."
    ^fave part^

    very good read!