.. This poem made me cry. Your pain was in every word and every sentence.. X

This is so moving Liz. You write about such every day situations that mnay people go through and you express the pain of it all so well.

I felt so much sympathy and heartache for you in this one. I liked how you repeated the lines :
I can hear you at a distance
You're faint cry overpowers me
- this worked really well and I think it gave the poem extra power to give a double impact on this image.

Well done.