Comments : Woman On The Wall

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    What a unique title to the poem which drew me in. The poems beginning was very powerful and then it seemed to wane a bit.
    Some of the end seemed to be forced, but the message was great. At the beginning I thought it could be about Mona Lisa, but then realized it was a poem about your mother. What an interesting concept. I enjoyed the read.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 13 years ago

    by Ross H Bruce

    Thank you. Inspiration from my deceased mother and my lost love. ;-)