Amazing!!!!
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Wow this was a dark poem. Your creativity really brought the poem to life. Was definitely a sad story read here. But you did really well expressing the emotions. Nice write. :)

Wow.. this was amazing. I love it and the imagery you used easily sucked the reader into every word and paragraph. It was so easy to really get into the story and feel sorry for both the victim and the man.

I love it!
5/5