Comments : Transformation

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    A very powerful write from you as usual. I have walked in these shoes and know from experience that what doesn't kill us does make us stronger and is usually spme type of means for revenge. Great Job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    I wish I had come across the poem sooner so I could nominate it, it was amazing. Maybe I'm in a certain place in my life were my emotions are resurfacing but this poem truly hit me. The emotions you expressed were ones I could relate with and although the scenario might have been different, I know how it feels to watch as dreams fall into pieces and the fire starts to go out. I'm really happy I read this because it was truly beautiful. I love every moment of it.

    Five.

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    I wish I had come across the poem sooner so I could nominate it, it was amazing. Maybe I'm in a certain place in my life were my emotions are resurfacing but this poem truly hit me. The emotions you expressed were ones I could relate with and although the scenario might have been different, I know how it feels to watch as dreams fall into pieces and the fire starts to go out. I'm really happy I read this because it was truly beautiful. I love every moment of it.

    Five.

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    It was so good my comment posted twice! :)