Comments : You weren't the one

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Aww, I'm sorry you feel/ felt this way. I hope things get better, or got better. Though it certantly created a wonderful piece. This is filled with emotion, yet that seems to be the only strength. It is not very origional, there is no creativity, and the wording is quite plain. I hope that this piece was only meant as an emotional release, because if not I am being quite rude and I greatly appoligise... Over all, because this is still a poem I gave it a 3... I'm sorry, but to me there is nothing spectacular.