Comments : Gaining Ground

  • 13 years ago

    by XxCatherinexX

    I loved the repetition, I loved the rhyme, I loved the theme, so overall I loved the poem! Great Job!

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    This poem was good. I liked that you described a girl who was broken but at the end of the experience she has found a strength she probably didn't even know she had. Loved it. Nice Write. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    Nice, love the bittersweet feel.