A very sad emotional write, Poetry to me is great when it reveals emotions pure and real! You have accomplished that! Well done!

Awww such a sad poem!! I could relate and feel the hurt and pain you're going through :(
I like how you expressed your emotions through nature and the things around you... It makes the hurt deeper and how life really is "bare" without her! Great job :) I hope you are inspired to write more poetry!! :)

Smillleeee!! =D

Been there, done that. It sucks. You describe it perfectly though. Excellent poem!

I love this! The last stanza is just amazing. I know exactly how it feels to have one person bring so much life into you. Truly inspiring work. 5/5

Svandyke