Oh my this poem is amazing. It has such story or meaning, and is penned from the true soul of yourself.Emotion and voice run through this piece like a raging river through a calm valley, in other words fantastic job. The word choice is terrific and it creates some wonderful imagery here and there. Your flow is simple and gets off in a few places, but it always catches back up and that is something simple to make a mistake with. This piece is going to go on my favorites list, I hope you know. 5/5

This is an amazing piece! I love the use of description and the continuous use of metaphoric language!
I like the structure of this poem, it made it a nice and easy read while painting the words you described in my mind very clearly. I feel there are many coded messages underlying this poem such as freedom...
"in your flight to a yonder land
far far away, beyond that the eye can see
where the sky meets the ocean
that no others will dare to go "
As the bird can fly and not be limited to what the human I can see.
I also think there is alot of bravery as well as something to look up to... being a leader and inspirator to those that are not as free as the bird to keep going... I really like this piece :)
5/5 for me

Wonderfully written, this poem is so inspirational and touching. I honestly couldn't decide what part I liked the most.

Your an amazing writer, I truely love this poem, I donno y, but I feel I wanna cry, after I read this poem.
This is great a 5/5:)