Comments : Thought finder

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    I am a huge Disney fan and I had never read that quote before, I loved it!

    Right off the bat I loved the format you chose to write with here. It was the perfect touch. The flow was just flawless and your word choice fit nicely with the message.

    "The fuzziness of my heart
    make me itch all over"
    I think you meant "makes" not make.

    Nicely done!

    Five.