Comments : Someone a little missed this day (Loop poem)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I think the style of this piece is terrific, and was executed well. The emotion and tone were so clear and present, but they were not weak as most seem to do; they were bold yet they did not over power the piece. The flow is amazing, it really worked along with the style. The creativity in this piece was so well thought of, and it really kept me interested in the piece. Overall I believe you have penned a successful, magnificent piece.