Comments : Upcoming Birthday

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This is another splendid poem...smooth and written in detailed piece..i like this part:
    >So on your upcoming birthday,
    Take the time to look ahead.
    See the novel that is the rest of your life,
    And face the future without dread.

    Yeah, you're right Birthday is like facing another chapter of life, another struggle to survive, another journey to step on...and another age to be mature...i love the way you write it..good one..rate 5/5
    keep on writing more:=)