Comments : I love YOU, I hate you

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Why why why
    I hate you so
    Just leave me alone
    Let me go

    I wish you were gone
    I wish you were dead
    I can't stand your face
    The words that you've said

    Get out of my life
    No, please come home
    Don't want you to leave
    My heart all alone

    ^ Just an example about the flow, a little rearranging and it goes more smoothly while reading. I actually like the idea behind the piece, I thought the confusion was something we have all felt at some point. if you worked on the flow of the piece it would be excellent.

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ohhhh this was one of those feelings I know a little too well...Letting go and moving hard is one of the hardest things in life. Ive been in this place where I so badly wanted to take the love of my life back, but deep down I hated him for hurting me...its confusing it really is...took me a few years to get over him, but I finally did it a few months ago..it will happen, keep your head up! :)