I think you should title this Pure confusion lol...

No but really, this poem was really sad. I couldn't figure out if it was about rape or just about someone surrendering to someone else in a relationship. Either way, I liked how it was all jumbled and filled with scattered thoughts. Some people wouldn't like that , But I did for sure! Its terribly sad and I hope its not a true story :)

Keep writing I'd like to read more of your work!
Chelsey