Comments : Imperfect Symmetry

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    For years I have scrambled
    into masks too unfitting for my taste-
    ^You have no idea how powerful these words are, how much they make sense if you look between the lines. I loved how you described these people as 'masks' - this really emphasizes a lot that they are unfamiliar to you and you don't have interest in them. I almost feel as though this is so straight forward that you wouldn't need 'too unfitted for my taste' - but then again, it is nice to have that as it only packs more of a punch.

    Even as you turn towards light,
    dark winds will persuade your soul,
    and yet I know which voice you will heed,
    for you are filled with nothing but passion.
    ^This is very inspirational. I loved it.

    Beautiful :) That's all I can say.