Much better this way, Michael!

It looks so majestic on the page, truly beautiful:)

I could almost see little Lucas doing this:)

5/5 Ingrid

I really enjoy Haiku poems and you have nailed it here for me with such wonderful imagery.

iridescent swirls

^^

beautiful image, captures bubbles in one line for me.

Nicely written. You gave a good description of a bubble. You used good wording and it was a good length. I see nothing that needs fixing.

I gave it a 5/5