Wow i felt this poem to be touching...very good poem and i enjoyed reading it :) :)

Destiny peered back
to see if fate followed.
-this is my favorite
but these were great as well:
Wistful destiny looking ahead,
sorrowful fate always wondering
about what was
or was never supposed to be
shooting stars crossing paths.

Destiny asked do you still need me,
fate said I cannot be without.
When destiny beckoned
playfully at the edge,
fate always succumbed.
- but i absolutely love love loved everything :) :) 5/5 10 stars

An interesting idea, giving things such as fate and destiny characteristics. In another context, one could see this as being names for two friends. Unique, and well written. 5/5

mandy :)