Oh my gosh, i actually got chills up my spine as i read that, (and i mean that in a good way!) i could really relate to this poem and I'm sure that theres a lot of other people out there too who would feel the exact same way!!its like we put up this facade of being so strong and seeming so happy when on the inside its a cold, broken and empty place which no one understands because they don't take the time to look past the facade, yet again another brilliant job!! perfectly executed :) well done Kris :)

I really like this one Kris...its great...lots of meaning:D

There's a lot of emotions that go thru me as I read it. You r putting up these walls and ur screaming but no one can hear you... its strong and emotional.

I actually enjoyed this piece, but I foound the structure off-putting. Because some lines were much longer than others, the rhythm didn't flow. It would be okay if every other line was long, but each time it just seemed out of place. BUt say I said, I enhoyed it. A nice string of words, well placed rhymes.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

I can really feel the emotions in this poem..
I can see the place.. Feel the loneliness in there ..

Amazing job :)