Great write! So deep I can tell its from the heart!
its so annoying when someone you love is blind back!

Thanxz emma yah actually he's now in a great hands of other girl now he'll be coming a great dad and a great husband already...it was really hurt but have to accept that we're not meant to be... :-(

Thanxz emma yah actually he's now in a great hands of other girl now he'll be coming a great dad and a great husband soon...it was really hurt but have to accept that we're not meant to be... :-(

This poem has some emotion, but is lacking it in certain places. The ending wasn't very strong at all. Your beginning was O.K, but no where close to fantastic or superb, or anything like that. I'm sorry that you weren't meant to be, because it seems as though this guy means a ton to you. There really is no flow to this poem. Though I do congradulate you on your word choice. It was simple and well put.

Excellent

These situations can make many things feel awkward and make us feel sick, best of luck!! hope all geos well for you!! :-)