Paige, this poem is hauntingly beautiful! It reminds me of my first boyfriend. Love the rhyme scheme and the imagery you create in this piece. The reader can paint a picture in their head. Great job! 5/5 katie

Wow, this is an amazing write. So soulful and painful. Something deep. I liked your used of words. Your flow and rhythm were spot on. I hope you can find solace with time. An excellent piece.

Danika
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