I liked it, it was good,
but just one thing if you don't mind-sorry
maybe say after the poem that it's from evanescence songs becasue then people can enjoy the poem first. it might just be me but since i knew beforehand it was more like chopped pieces put together...

Okay I'll do that, thanks for the advice ;-) Never occurred to me, that it could have that effect, but you are perfectly right.