Such a shame, fathers not being there for their children. There are tons of poems on this site about this same exact problem, Ive written a few myself. :(

It's ok daddy I know I'm not your kid,
Your kid is the bottle of jack.

^ Id just say watch your syllable count here, it kind of threw off the flow a bit. and the repition of your kid should be changed.

Other than that good work :) You remind me of myself when I used to write rhyming poetry