I thought this poem had some typical rhymes which is typical in a lot of rhyming poems :/

However, the story line was terribly sad. My parents got divroced 2 years ago and my dad is dating someone else. I could relate to certain parts of this poem. Its a sad thing to go to, but sometimes it works out for theb est thats for sure.

Death is not the way to go
But if it were my choice I would let it be so
Instead I pick up the tape, staples and glue
And place back the memories that I once drew

^ This ending was great! I'm glad to see you ended it on a positive note! Good job :)
Chelsey

This Poem obviously shows off your rhyming skills and style. In my own opinion I think Poetry is about Presentation if Anything. Example, Space out your lines, like every 4, 6 or 8 lines leave a gap or a line and then proceed again.

Instead I pick up the tape, staples and glue
And place back the memories that I once drew

That is whopper of a finish. I great conclusion. 10/10.

My poetry is all about imagery and nature mostly, so if you like you can use more descriptive words. Example

My bear ted cant make this alright
I cry alone in the dusk of night

I'd write it like this

My blissful Bear Ted, can't recycle or rearrange this alright,
My Chagrin will never dissolve in the rust and blackness of this treacherous night