Holy Cow..I aboslutely loved loved loved this....For one, I really do enjoy the title! It makes it very intriguing I wondered where you went with this poem!

I love how the initmacy is described here yet there is a terribly sad tone to this poem..I thought this was just really creative and you did very very well with it :)

Chels

I agree with Chelsey, this was really creative and wow, did it pull me. This is a very raw subject to write about and I like how you incorperated yourself into the situation. My mother had a problem with alocohol and this really hit home. This is very well structured and written brilliantly. Well done : )

Danika

Sometimes I think a lot of people to fall into habits such as this to cure their problems, I have seen someone in my life go through it and it's hard to watch. Lovely title, you chose a good one and used it nicely!