I love how you repeated "every moment of each day" through out the poem it truly emphasizes its importance.
I also loved how it flowed like a story with such deep meaning.

This is beautiful, and amazing and i love that you repeated every moment od each day throughout the wholw thing. very powerful poem.

Absolutely mesmerizing!
A tender and somber piece that is filled with beauty and love.
I like the repetitiveness, it makes the poem even stronger in the way that the reader gets to know what you feel and think "every moment of every day."
5/5
Beautiful.