Unfortunatly we cant choose who we fall in love with or how they feel about us in return. Fact of life.

Though this is a good poem, I feel like it lacks the maturity of previous pieces I have read of yours - considering the ones I have read prior to this were written later, that shows you are improving - fantastic!

4/5

Unfortunatly we cant choose who we fall in love with or how they feel about us in return. Fact of life.

Though this is a good poem, I feel like it lacks the maturity of previous pieces I have read of yours - considering the ones I have read prior to this were written later, that shows you are improving - fantastic!

4/5

Turns out - 5/5 afterall... Oops haha