Comments : Now.......... and later?

  • 13 years ago

    by Misshapenheart21

    All of the poeams i write are starts to songs that im writng.... justat the first stage... if you see them edited... or two similar poems... or a changed title.... they are works in progress

  • 13 years ago

    by Misshapenheart21

    I am a beginner songwriter.... the first part of this poem (Now you lie, you cheat, you fake, you steal from me!
    How come you are not ashamed?
    Where are we supposed to go from here?
    We can't let our friendship slip away...
    )
    is a piece of a song im writing.... i dont know if i will add the rest in... any thoughts?