I liked the concept of this poem. If anyone tells you this concept is overdone, don't listen to them. When something is about the heart it can never be overdone. I loved the emotion, putting it into a letter format was very orginal. I loved the fact that at the end you realize that you lost something as well as him. I know some times it's hard to see that after a break up, but if you broke up obviously he wasn't the one for you. I hope to read more by you, you have a lot of talent. Keep it up.

Svandyke

Awe, this made me smile, thank you so much! :)
& we didn't breakup, my bestfriend was being a d!!ckhead, and I realized he wasn't worth my time anymore.

but thankyou, again!