Comments : Deathreaper

  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like this one, it expresses a lot of emotions with no direct mention of them. I can sense pain, waiting, longing, loneliness and depression from your words. Well written, nice, short, clean cut. I only have one comment on this one; in short poems try not to repeat a word more than once; it puts you off the beat or rhythm of the poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    This blew my mind