Comments : Yes,I know.

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    This is the perfect love poem to me. One thing that really rings true here and everywhere is I can't do everything and I'm not perfect, but I CAN love you. Ohh, beautifully written!

    "That I've written books about
    those who gave me only a page,"

    LOVE this. So sad and incredibly true the way some people are now. So often we give ourselves to those who only like to take. Perfect way to state this feeling and thought :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That I stood for
    what held me back,
    yet abstained from standing
    for what pushed me forward

    ^^ Amazing..i was a bit confused, then read it slowly and it hit me how brilliant I thought it was!

    This whole poem was just lovely Yaki, and somthing a lot of us go through. I for one could really relate to
    "that I ignored that which praised my heart.
    to chase what never thought of me."

    Reminded me of when I chased boys and not chased God...

    such a relateable and great piece girl!