Comments : Lonesome soul

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    This is yet another poem that shows such strength and maturity. Beautifully written!

    Such a strong opening stanza that leaves room for so much. It really rings the thought of growing up too fast, knowing too much.

    Love the imagery in stanza 2!

    "getting weaker with every step
    yet stronger with every thought.. "

    Amazing! I love the way this was penned. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!