Comments : Independence Day

  • 12 years ago

    by rob

    Thank you Eric.. I appreciate your time to read and thoughts very much.
    Have a nice day.
    Regards,
    Rob

  • 12 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Rob this poem was well written and an interesting read. The story tells of how two lovers meet fall in love become disenchanted and fall out of love. This is true for most people, I think almost everyone has at least one such story. My thoughts about old flames tends to be " well she was a nice girl, but what was I thinking?" Well written Rob and a reminder to me to cherish my love. Grant