The first Stanza drove me crazy !!!

But let me tell you you're quite a patient girl I mean, if I had such a mirror by the last stanza I would be saying :

Mirror mirror on the ground
Shards and pieces scattered around
You're no good to me I shall never bow
......

regardless of what the last line would say but you get the picture :)). read some of my stuff sometime ^_^.

Wow... This was AWESOME!

Wow... This was AWESOME!

Wow... This was AWESOME!

I loved this, every word. beautifully written, i also liked mohameds ending, i liked yours as well fits into the theme you had going through each stanza, nice powerful ending. 5/5 keep writing, love your work.
take care
xkimx