Good start..keep trying

This may be short but that does not effect the fact that i think it is alright. I liked the repetition and the message, though you could of stated it a bit more detailed.

This may be short but that does not effect the fact that i think it is alright. I liked the repetition and the message, though you could of stated it a bit more detailed.

Thanxx i'll try to improve myself next time.. :)

Ur good :) perfect rhyming too :) 5/5

I like this alot - Good advise, word of the wise, I will try to keep this in mind - I find it really useful and appropiate! :)

True poem and i quite agree sweety good poem

Lady Anastasia