loved it..5 all the way =) as usual another great one

Pretty good. I loved it. I wish it could have been longer though.
David

I was trying to write a sonnet... an Italian sonnet.. thats why i stopped it in 14 lines...Thanks for the comments everybody

wow ur talented =) muah i loved this one

excellent again! what marvelous poems you have, keep up the excellent work!Love julie -xx-

Great job Trincy. These types of poems look easy at first glance, but can be tricky keep a flow to. You did just that! Excellent work!

hey trincy...nice poem. very well written liked the topic too.something different and very beautifully written.keep writing!!!