Comments : What is wrong with him?

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    AWESOME poem!! Really powerful and filled with expression... He should treat you better!

  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    Thanks Crystal moonlight, I have written 4 poems. You should check them out. Mum says their awesome!

  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    5 poems now!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    And she is right they are AWESOME!

  • 12 years ago

    by natasha

    This is a very beautiful poem. Im inpressed. i dont think i would write that well of a poem at 9. loved it you got my vote. a 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    Thanks natasha!

  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    @Natasha I updated my profile couple weeks back and am 10 now, I've been that old since February!