Nice write!
Good flow
deep with emotions
was a great read :)

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Wow, that is a really powerful poem. You really hit deep with those emotions.

Good job! Keep up the good work!

There's a lot of emotion here, maybe a bit repetitive, but a really good poem. Thank you.

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Grt,i ws livin al dis once..touchin,lvd it

Very good and heart felt, i like it alot