This poem was amazing. I wanted to keep reading more, haha. Rythym in some stanzas were off but other than that it was a lovely peice. Keep it up. :) 5/5

Thank you :)

Few little tweaks needed but all in all still a stunning piece 5/5

Aha I got tired half way through this one and my computer was frezzing :P this was my first one I'm pretty sure :) but thank you