Comments : Curtain Call

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Wow, I loved the rhythm of this piece and the message. It clearly came across as something I would have heard set to some music by Metallica.
    In my opinion you would do this piece great justice to break it up a bit and not have it read like a story. It would make for a longer poem visually, but I think it would be more aesthetically pleasing.
    I really enjoyed the message and overall write of the poem. I noticed you are new to P&Q and just wanted to welcome you aboard.
    This poem is definitely worthy of a nomination as a fresh new read. It was a delight to read something different from the norm. I hope others feel the same.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 12 years ago

    by QueenGwen

    Your way of saying things has such an esay flow to them, like if there was a slow beat behind the words. Great job. :)