Very well written piece!
I like the way you crafted the imagery with such deep emotion and meaning that flows very nicely!
5/5

Thats really powerful, i love your writing style it flows beautifully you have a truly great gift ! :-)

There is a light-heartedness about your poems, LJ, that makes your poems stand out.

Within your words, the reader gets a sense of the joy living with Cherisa has brought you...rainbow kisses..may the be shared in abundance always between you two:)

A lovely read, well done!

Hugs from Ingrid 5/5