I really enjoyed reading this poem! Thanks you for sharing!
I love how you talked about the wind and introduced the colours it wonderfully painted a picture in my mind.
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LJ, i did really miss reading your poetry and i am glad you are back with us. Welcome back. Soon i will read your poems to refreshened my memory of those words of you that makes me think. Again welcome back, kel.

I like how the theme of Nature was reflected in the colours. The poem is easy to read with a good structure and vocabulary.

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Enjoyed it