Over all this poem is amazing. The message is just stunning. You have a beautiful flow, great choice of words too. I think this fit together well, and of many like it this one leaves an impression. Emotion and hope just ooze out of it everywhere.

Things go wrong, but things do go right
It's possible not to hurt.
Constant pain, it can be a choice,
At least, that's what I have learned.

^ Is my favorite stanza, because it's when hope is really introduced to the poem. This is what makes everything else fall into place.

This poem is so extraordinary that it is totally getting 5/5 from me

Exactly! There's nothing more to add.. Just said it best!! Much enjoyed the read, keep bringing in.. 5pts!

So inspiring it really explains how life is

Thank you all so much :)