Comments : A Ballad for Vanity

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Really dark, mysterious evil in it, but guess what? I loved it !!

    The devil was lost the day he took my soul
    ^^
    I think its my soul that he took, not yours :P

    The fantasy and the story you plot was amazing, it takes you to an imaginary place with every line you wrote ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This is different then any other poem I have read. I especially liked this line
    "For thoughts of lust are in sheets of Lenin"

    excellently penned

  • 12 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Greatly penned..i like the idea that the poem is dark..words are powerful...well done......amazing choice of words..