Comments : To think i used to love you

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    Sounds very similar to a poem I read here before called "Roses are red, I play you too"

    ok rhymes
    ok theme
    ok message.

    The sentences get cut off, and need more detail though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Renea

    Wow that explains me n james....but i didnt play him i just messed around with other guys!!! ha ha ha ha

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Ariel

    lol