Wow this is such a beautiful poem!
I love the first stanza where you talk about the stars and the face is all you see that was a nice image you created in my mind...
I love the flow and where you bring in dialogue of what he said and what you said made the poem more effective and realistic!
Great Job!
5/5

Beautiful poem i wrote something like this a few years ago it feel nostalgic i can relate to this the male perspective of course lol but anyways good poem enjoyed reading it